The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/11
Such a sad tale, but the truth is this does happen all the time.

02/14/11
A sad tale, very well written. It flowed beautifully from beginning to end. Great job describing that era.
What a sad story. You did a great of telling it. With some more character development, you could easily turn this into a novel synopsis. It's the start of a great story interesting characters and thrilling conflict.
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level one!