The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/11
Great story, especially the positive ending!
02/12/11
Brilliant. Loved the happy ending.
02/12/11
Great writing. I really liked the last line.
Ok! That's a good one. You will never finish until you have reached the end but we need to end successfully as well in all we do. Thank you!
I liked how you told how this family went through a typical cycle andI could relate to the MC, It gave me hope.