The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very powerful piece of writing. The opening was great, had me wanting to faster to find out what was happening. At the end, I was disappointed it had to finish, as I wanted to read more of her story. Great job.
The end is a one-two punch. Strong rebuke followed by words of comfort. Makes me want to know more about the reason for the woman's trouble.
We will never walk the life some people have lived, so it is important never to be judgmental.

Powerful writing.
This is an interesting story. I like how you said God can understand_ all groans and screams.