The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/11
This is a very powerful piece of writing. The opening was great, had me wanting to faster to find out what was happening. At the end, I was disappointed it had to finish, as I wanted to read more of her story. Great job.
02/12/11
The end is a one-two punch. Strong rebuke followed by words of comfort. Makes me want to know more about the reason for the woman's trouble.
02/12/11
We will never walk the life some people have lived, so it is important never to be judgmental.

Powerful writing.
This is an interesting story. I like how you said God can understand_ all groans and screams.