The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
great story and the victorian era was a great one indeed... I loved your use of the guide to an old house as the way into this story.I wonder if in 100 years time people will be talking about the Second Elizabethan era in the same hushed and reverent tones.
This was an interesting peek into the Victorian Era.
02/12/11
Very interesting perspective from the eyes of a guide. I found it very informative.

I probably would have left out the part of the sentence about choosing this story for the writing assignment.
Otherwise your piece flowed really well.