The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
good story it would have been even more personal if you had given your character a name. The use of "he" seems to make it one step back.
a good use of the theme and well crafted.
There are many personal eras or phases of ay life. How wonderful that Jesus is there with us through each period.
02/15/11
I could almost feel the pain of this man trying to share a life with one whose values were so different. I like how he sees the Lord's hand in it all, and how the Lord is there to renew his strength. Nice job.