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What a thrilling yet totally totally terrifying story. You made Thomas feel so real. I pray this never happens, it's a terrifying future.
02/11/11
I liked how you brought in great details of this house, setting the tone for the climax of your story. And how the light of God's word can prepare us for things to come. Well done.
02/12/11
a great story...a somewhat enigmatic title... the story was atmospheric and grippingly told. It reminded me of the jews having to hid from the Nazis in German occupied countries and it was very clever indeed to bring this into ? America could have been just as easily England.
it should be a winner.... lets see
02/12/11
What times we are living in. It is sad to think we have come to this place of such intolerance. It's time we got down on our knees and pray.

This piece gave me a lot to think of.
02/15/11
Wow! This is really powerful, the sort of story that warns us to be prepared. Very realistic and a timely message.