The Official Writing Challenge
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I can't imagine being stuck in an elevator overnight! I like how your character used the time to meet a friend and witness to her. God gives us all kinds of Opportunities to impact someone's life. We just need to do it.
02/08/11
Definitely an effective use of time. Enjoyed this.
02/08/11
What a nice use of an opportunity. That's what I call a captive audience! I was glad that she risked getting the silent treatment in that elevator. Lives are often saved in many different ways, physical and spiritual. I like how she fed the woman's spirit but didn't forget to feed her, physically, too.