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10/11/05
You have potential. I love the fact this was so easy to read and really had that feeling with it, of a peaceful summer's breeze. A little elaboration and this could be awesome.
10/12/05
I'm sorry, but I don't get it. Did the warrior become a flower? Why?

You have a way with words, and your story creates a very serene atmosphere. I think it just needs more...something.
10/12/05
Sweet. It's amazing how God's simple beauty in nature can evoke all kinds of responses!
10/12/05
Sweet. It's amazing how God's simple beauty in nature can evoke all kinds of responses!
10/29/05
1 John 3:16a Hereby perceive we the love of GOD because He laid down His life for us... Great strength is tender. A tender heart becomes involved. Involvement accepts you where you are.

.....peace.....