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02/06/11
This sounds like like a thrilling adventure. You nicely described animals I dream of seeing someday. (Maybe not an upset elephant) I think your story would have had more punch if you started it at the Nature Park. You really didn't need to explain. You did a great job with the details and ending.
02/08/11
Wow - what an experience you had! Great descriptions.
02/08/11
i was with you on every twist and turn of the journey. thank you for taking us with you!
02/08/11
Nature is never predictable, but I never imagined you would end up facing an angry elephant.

The descriptions of the animals and their habitat was very interesting. I really learned a lot and enjoyed reading your piece.