The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
What a touching story and a reminder that God's grace extends to everyone once they go to Him in faith. Sin had put this man in prison but forgiveness and salvation set him free.
02/06/11
Juat like the two thieves on the cross, there was no other religous thief dying who could trumph what Jesus had told the one who was coming into His Father's kingdom.

Well told.
What A clever take on what would you do of you had 24 hours to have idea. I liked the voice of your MC. He seemed real and credible. Although I often think the dream part of a story is an easy explanation, this is one of those times when it really works. God does talk to us in our dreams. Nice job!
02/08/11
This one brought me to tears. Boy is it good! Keep writing and keep up the good work!
02/08/11
Touching piece of writing. I liked your phrasing of his words, they made him seem so real--saying anything to make the chaplain leave.

I am so glad that God is willing to forgive us, even that last moment before death.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level one!