The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/11
Good writing. Hope you do well in the competition with this piece!
02/07/11
good writing ... like pauls thorn in the flesh :-) is it hot flushes that this is about?? it doesnt really matter as it could relate to many types of sudden pain/ ailment/ even panic attacks
great descriptions i felt it !
Your words are powerful. I do admit it took me at least 2 read through to get it. Maybe the sweat dripping down my face and into my eyes burned my thoughts:) Great description!-
Congratulations for placing 7th in level one!