The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/11
What a wonderful piece to get us to focus on the important things of life. True we don't know what a day will bring - good article on trust.
02/07/11
good writing, thanks for this clear and well rounded piece full of sensible and logical advice and reminders. I wounder if you had used the first person in parts it might have made it even better before generalising it.
just an idea... you use we and you through out and an occasional "I" might improve an otherwise good piece. just my thoughts others might disagree...
This is a good reminder of how everything can change in g blink of an eye.
02/09/11
We don't know what our day may hold, time is precious and should be spent wisely. Thank you for your piece.