The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/11
Your story is well written and captivating, holding my interest to the very end. You have given us cause to do much soul searching. Thank you for sharing.
02/06/11
I think you made an excellent point. I had to reread the last couple of sentences to get it but overall I think it had a nice flow between past and present. Good Job!
02/08/11
This story has an excellent message. Loved it.
Congratulations for placing 15th in level one!