The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/11
Enjoyed your story. Your descriptions are excellent. Thank you for sharing.
02/05/11
I liked the images in your story, especially the pictures you created while unloading your bags and making the soup.

Top notch story. I hope it does well in the judging.
02/07/11
great story :-) I loved the descriptions and the scents and scenes you describe with a great sense of detail. I love the onions rolling over the floor and the shopping bags. I can almost taste the soup. your character sounds like a wonderful caring person to have as a neighbour.
02/08/11
The flavor of your MC sure has a lot of character. I loved the taste of this "soup."
Congratulations for placing 14th in level one!