The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/11
I enjoyed your well written poem. With writing like this, you will move up quickly.Thank you for sharing.
02/06/11
lovely I was there on the beach with you experiencing the beauty of the sea and sand
02/08/11
It's easy to picture this very beachy, very perfect day. Great job.
02/08/11
What a beautiful poem. It brought me a sense of peace and comfort. I just drank in all the sights and sounds of the beach.
02/10/11
always good to see a poem in first place :-) now you are promoted to the next level :-) see your there!