The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/11
You have given much to ponder and your story was well told. Thank you for sharing.
02/06/11
great writing and you tell the story with sensitivity and make what could be a rather melodramatic and macabre subject into one with humanity tenderness and compassion.

the clock ticking lends a sense of inevitibility to the whole tale of the events.
maybe this will be a winner but yet again there are so many great pieces in this weeks selection
02/08/11
Very well written, and about a very difficult topic. Great take on the 24 hours.
02/08/11
Very well written.
It's great that God gives us the best pardon ever.