The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
I love that 4th paragraph. What a beautiful lesson in forgiveness. If I could suggest anything for improvement, it would be to tighten your focus - your analogy seemed a little broad, perhaps trying to incorporate several ideas into one piece. But your writing itself flows nicely - engaging descriptions and well-crafted sentences. Keep up the good work!
10/11/05
That's great. I never thought to look at it like that - but it's all there in the bible. Nice analogy. Nice devotional. I really do love it. Thanks.
10/12/05
What an excellent prayer! Thanks for allowing us to share in your experience and your insights. I appreciate your metaphors. Good job maintaining a steady balance in describing feelings toward the earthly garden and the spiritual one, particularly the relationship with the step-daughter.