The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 741 times
Member Comments
I enjoyed reading your story. (I love decorating and flowers too). However, there were at least four or five typos (missing or doubled words). I think it could have used more paragraph breaks too, but I tend to go overboard on those myself, so maybe you can ask someone who knows better. :) Over all, I think you did a good job!
Very cute; I can just imagine your house and your daughter's room. (Bet you could just kick yourself that your first word was a typo...) Very charming and sweet piece.