The Official Writing Challenge
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Dad did a good job retelling the story of Abraham. I liked how now you tell the stories. Good job.
01/31/11
great story and a lovely way of telling it. i liked the way you completed the circle at the end.
you have inherited great story telling ability from your dad :-0
02/02/11
I loved all the description and dialogue. I can just imagine sitting out in the boat and looking in the heavens. I especially liked the last line.
I love fishing and being on the water so your story is definitely a hit with me. One small point: In the sentence where you say God promised Abraham we would -- I think you meant, he would. This is a well written devotional message that I enjoyed reading.