The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/11
What a great message you have here! Make sure you proofread your work before sending it in. It really helps me to read my entries aloud so I can catch my errors. You're right. He is always with us!
01/31/11
thank you and a great message of hope and encouragement at the start of a new year.
01/31/11
I'm glad God always gives us a new beginning and new opportunities.

There are a couple of run-on sentences, but the theme and message is very good.