The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/11
i like this little poem which is right on target for the theme. I wonder if you split it up into stanzas(verses) it might still flow as smoothly but allow for some pauses as well
01/29/11
Nice poem. I would like to see a stanza separtation also.
01/31/11
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01/31/11
I liked your poem, especially the math calculations.