The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/11
I appreciate the emotions revealed from your heart, colorful as the many seasons.

Keep it up.

Mary
I love how you equated the season' with Rachel's feelings. My heart started thumping at the end of the first paragraph.

Although your descriptions were divine, there may have been too much for a short story. I wanted to know what had happened in the MC's life to make her feel so much rage and despair.

You definitely have a great deal of talent. I felt myself holding my breath in several spots. You had a great take on the topic!
01/24/11
full of rich description and i found it interesting who you related the colours and emotions together.
Congratulations on your HC Kara! You have so much natural talent. Keep writing.
01/27/11
Congratulations on the Highly Commended! This piece has such a lovely feel to it. I could relate to the emotions in each season and especially liked the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Ooooo, very creative article. I loved seeing the emotions turn into tangible things around her.
A deserving Congratulations Kiddo! Your creative imagination swept through me with great emotion for the MC. I too, look forward to what comes next. :)