The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/11
I love the relationship between mother and daughter, and of course, the gown. Warm story.
01/20/11
It was a touching story. I loved how the generations were all tied together around the wedding dress.
What a beautiful story that would be retold to each new generation. The last line seemed almost forced. I think it would have been a lovely ending with Neil's words. Your did a great job telling a darling story.
Congratulations for ranking 12th among all level one entries!