The Official Writing Challenge
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For any parent who has lost a child, this piece will touch them deeply. Honest, tender and very moving. God bless.
10/12/05
I cried through the whole thing. This was so well-written - your character-development was brilliand and realistic. This family's circular legacy of faith was beautifully portrayed. Find a peer editor to help you with punctuation (commas between phrases etc.) Beautiful story!
10/13/05
This is a tearjerker! I like that she admitted that knowing the reason her daughter was gone would not stop the pain. Very authentic emotion. Thank you.