The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
You gave me quite a bit to think about in this essay. I especially liked the last few paragraphs there is a lot of truth in those words.

You may want to watch haw many times you use the same word especially in such a short piece.

Overall you did a great job with the topic. Keep writing. I can tell you have passion for the scriptures.
01/24/11
I especially liked this, "Flowers enjoy the sunlight but experience much of their growth in the rain." You've obviously thought through you message here. It's filled with wisdom.
01/25/11
I enjoyed reading this essay. It was very thought provoking and well written. Thanks for writing!
01/28/11
Congratulations for ranking 15th among all level one entries!