The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
I LOVE the personification in this! The love between the two is tangible! A favorite line was your play on words, "Oh little Bengal! What a kitten!" :) …and on a reread this was majestic! Wow!
01/21/11
Absolutely sublime. The sense of fury with the storm, bookended by the tranquility of the swooning, lovely calm was delicious. Loved the imagery details, like the long hair on the bare backs...sigh.
Just gorgeous.
All the poetic devices here used carefully, word on word,combine to make an awesome poem. The imagery paints a magnificent picture.
I can tell this is profound, I'm a bit embarrassed to say it was tad over my head, but the parts I did understand left me with Goosebumps! Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
01/27/11
wonderful! i thought i had commented on this one already. I loved reading it. congratulations
I read it again, this time my brain totally understood it. You have such an intense style of writing! Congratulations on placing!
01/27/11
hey!! super congrats on your ribbon!! :)
01/27/11
I loved the power of the poem and all the imagery involved. The poem evoked strong feelings.

Congratulations on your win.