The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this very much...For me it was easy to follow and paints a lovely picture...
10/11/05
I think it's beautiful imagery as well. Thanks for brightening my day!
10/12/05
Be careful of unnecessary apostrophes (hues, its). Nice comparison of a blossoming child to a flower.
I agree, this creates a beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing!
Lovely imagery and lovely comparisons. Very nice indeed. God bless.