The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/11
Thanks for reminding me that in the midst of every circumstance, God is there. Hope remains eternal.
Having become a mother at the tender age of 18, I could really relate to your MC's feelings. I wish you had expanded more on your me. I mould have enjoyed reading more about her, fund out who she really is and how she learned to depend on God. You had a great message that just about everyone could relate to.
01/24/11
lovely. so well written. i was not sure on the title. did you mean "I am Here" or did you mean to use "hear"?
Diana,

It's funny that you ask that. I didn't realize I spelled it that way. All I can say is I was so caught up in my own story that my subconscious mind was thinking hear just like my character was hearing God speak to her. When I finally saw it on my entry I was embarrassed by the fact that I used the wrong form.