The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/11
Your piece really brought up a lot of emotions for me. I am also into the beginning of "winter". I especially liked the fourth paragraph about reminiscences and gray matter.

A well thought out piece.
This was an interesting journey down memory lane. I liked haw you told of the different seasons of your life.

My advice would be to double check how you used quotation marks and ellipses. I think there were times when you didn't need them.

I appreciate your courage in sharing such intimate parts of your life and I enjoyed the read.
01/24/11
great memory treasures from the treasure box of lifes seasons. thanks for unwrapping them for us :-)