The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely and simple but makes a statement...I enjoyed
With a few edits, this lovely, simple verse could easily be an illustrated children's storybook. Very charming.
I really enjoyed this. A fun, enjoyable poem! Thanks for sharing!
Lovely, and I agree with Jan - a illustrated childrens verse was how I was seeing too. God bless.