The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
very interesting article :-)
01/13/11
You have an impressive knowlege about rare, or potentially rare animals.
Unfortunately, your entry "orbits:-)" the topic with the exception of one reference in the last sentence. I think you want to show that if nothing is done, these animals will soon be "once in a blue moon" creatures. That message came through, but has minimal relevance to the topic.

Keep writing. I think reading other entries on this topic in all levels, but especially advanced levels, will prove beneficial to you.
01/14/11
a GREAT tip: check out Jan's classes! She has one on the rating category concerning "was the entry on topic?" (All her other classes are GREAT as well!)
01/15/11
Interesting, and a lot of research. Good job.
01/18/11
Knowledgeable and interesting article. Thanks!
01/20/11
Congratulations Kim! Your very first entry too!! Very good eye opener.Well done!
01/20/11
Haha! So much for comments. Great research on one of my favorite topics (endangered species). Congratulations.
Patty
01/20/11
So sad to see some of God's creation slowly dissapearing. Great article!
01/20/11
What a powerful essay. I really enjoyed every word You gave a great message without being preachy! Congratulations on your first place ribbon!
01/20/11
God's creation is so awesome. Congratulations on your first place win.