The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the picture you painted with your words. The writing was vivid and you could feel emotion in your words. Well done!
Beautiful memories beautifully told. Give each new line of dialogue a new paragraph, it helps in the reading of it. Lovely stuff. God bless.
This was so well-written, I forgot I was in the Beginners section! I think this would have a stronger beginning if you took out the first sentence; just start right in with the memories - don't explain that you're reminiscing.

A peer editor could help you catch those tiny details (punctuation etc.) - I say that not to discourage you, but because you have a great writer's "voice" and your story is well-crafted - now you can get pickier about eensy-weensy details.

Great job, overall. You should be proud of this piece!
Isn't it amazing how the Lord uses each life experience to show us Himself? Thank you so much for sharing this one with us! Your fond memory of your grandmother is obvious in each sentence. What a treasure to have!
I really enjoyed this. So many of our best moments in life are those spent doing something we enjoy with loved ones. Thanks for sharing!
Your ending ties it all up so nicely! Thanks!
One may plant,another may water, but it is God that gives the increase! He eagerly watches for us to shoot through the earth and grow to new heights! This story reminds me of the times when I await the rebirth of my daylilies every spring. I get so excited when the first leaves shoot through the dirt! Thanks.
Hello, gee this really touched my heart, and caused me to think about my mother and I working together in the flowers. So, touching and inspirational too. I have to agree with everyone..very nice peice. God bless you!!
PS: I can't wait to see who wrote this.