The Official Writing Challenge
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12/25/10
I could picture this whole scene. :) Your humor was enjoyable. (and your asides to the reader made me smile.)
12/25/10
Cute story. Thanks for sharing and Merry Christmas.
This is a charming rendition. I'm not sure if you needed the sentences in the parenthesis. They were funny, but you did A good job with the humor without without pointing it out to the reader. You have a wonderful writing style. Keep at it. Great job!