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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Communication Breakdown (12/16/10)

TITLE: When God Whispers
By Barbara Lynn Culler


Turning to my right, I leaned over and whispered into Juan’s ear. “Today is Wednesday”
I repeated my boring sentence, and then aloud, re-defined the instructions for the game.

“Juan, what you heard me say, whisper that to Anton.
Anton, you whisper to Peleh what you thought Juan told you.
Peleh, you then whisper to Nassir what you think Anton told you.
Nassir, you will then tell everybody else what you heard Peleh tell you.”

I whispered to Juan: “Today is Wednesday.”
He chuckled and cupped his hand around his mouth as he spoke into Anton’s left ear. With a puzzled expression, Anton softly spoke into Peleh’s right ear. Having a hearing impairment hindered Peleh’s interpretation of what he heard, thus the phrase was repeated. Peleh turned his body and murmured to Nassir what he thought he heard. With a big smile and twinkling eyes, at what he perceived spoken, Nassir declared: “We are going to eat now!”

The larger group laughed. However, when I stated what I’d originally said, the group burst out in rolling-on- the-floor laughter. I was doing staff training on communication, and we played the game to prove the point:
What we hear and what we think and say we heard can be completely mistaken.

Did these guys actually hear what was being said or did they just make something up because they could not understand what they heard? This is an age-old problem in that people hear what they want to hear. Or, they deliberately refuse to believe that what they hear is important. This was the case in the story of Adam and Eve.

In the third chapter of Genesis, (NIV) God was speaking to Adam and told him:
“You are free to eat from any tree in the garden; but you must not eat from the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, for when you eat of it, you will surely die.”

Adam informed Eve of this and warned her to not eat the fruit. Conversely, Satan tells Eve that it is okay to eat from that particular tree.

“You will not surely die… For God knows that when you eat of it, your eyes will be opened, and you will be like God, knowing good and evil”

Eve knew what Adam had told her, yet she listened to what Satan said because she wanted what was offered:

“When the woman saw that the fruit of the tree was good for food and pleasing to the eye, and also desirable for gaining wisdom, she took some and ate it.”

Eve enjoyed the sweetness of the fruit and shared it with Adam. They ate the fruit;knowing that they were wrong and immediately had understanding of good and evil. As a consequence God cursed their lives due to disobeying his instructions.

This account teaches the importance of hearing and obeying God’s instruction. We can be deceived by listening to other ideas because we like what they are saying. Nevertheless, not obeying what God tells us results in consequences that are not in our best interest.

What made my training activity regarding communication extraordinary is that the four participants were each of a different ethnic group and English is their second language. It was not planned that way; they just happen to be sitting together, and my point was underscored. Nassir heard what he wanted to hear because he was hungry and food was nearby. In this case, it was a great segue to end for lunch, because the point was made:

The importance of communication and how different interpretations can affect what we think we are hearing.

Are you correctly hearing what God is telling you? Are you obeying Him or following someone else comprehension of what you should be doing?

Dear God, thank you for the lessons learned in your Word; from people like me who get it wrong. Help us to recognize what you are saying and give us the understanding to accurately pass on to others what you intend for us to hear and understand.

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Cheryl Harrison12/23/10
I enjoyed this. I remember playing this game when I was young. Good lesson too. Keep writing.
Nancy Sullivan 12/24/10
You did a great job of connecting your example to the Bible story of the communication breakdown that changed the world. Your summary thoughts were right on target also. God Bless and Merry Christmas!
Brenda Rice 12/25/10
You did a very good job of explaining your thoughts in this devotional. I like the conclusion you came to and it is well written. Merry Christmas
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/25/10
This is a great devotion. I liked how you showed an example that everyone can relate.
diana kay12/26/10
we always used to call this game Chinese whispers and it was a real fun game often played at children's parties.... a good example of miscommunication. I like the way you expand it to develop a Christian message
Sarah Elisabeth 12/26/10
Performing that exercise in a multicultral group must have been interesting indeed! Good devotion
Verna Cole Mitchell 12/27/10
You've definitely moved way beyond "Beginners." This is an excellent devotional with the message demonstrated clearly.
Lillian Rhoades 12/29/10
Real nice. Great intro. and take-away power point at the end.
Amanda Brogan12/30/10
Alright, Barb!!! Time for Intermediate! :D
Nancy Sullivan 12/30/10
So proud of you, Barb. Congratulations on your 1st Place and your PROMOTION!!!
God Bless.
Cheryl Harrison12/30/10
Barbara! Congrats on your placing. I knew this was a winner when I read it the first time. :o)
Rita Garcia12/30/10
CONGRATULATIONS!! Wow! What a great analogy! Love the structure and the lesson in this piece! Well done!!
Loren T. Lowery12/30/10
Congratulations, Barbara. Your teaching/supervisory skills shine through on this. It is well written, concise, but most importantly, seems to be written from the heart. No wonder it won!
AnneRene' Capp12/30/10
Congratulations Barb...WAY TO GO! Yep...devotionals are definitely what I hear God calling you to write!! :)

This left me with good thought pondering tidbits to digest. Amen.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/30/10
Barb I'm so glad you didn't give up on writing because you do have A lot of talent! I'm doing my happy dance for you! You'll be in level 3 in no time-mark my words!
Amy Michelle Wiley 12/31/10
I've played this in English, ASL, and art/drawing. So funny. In real life I "play" the game with my hard-of-hearing dad every single day, ha. Great point, well written, and congrats on the level placement!
diana kay12/31/10
onwards and upwards ... well done
Carol Penhorwood 12/31/10
There you go! First place! No excuses now for moving up...! Superb!
Kim Hamlin01/09/11
Barb, I loved your story. Definitely takes me back in time and really drives the lesson home. Congrats on your win!
Coleene VanTilburg 01/13/11
Congratulations on a first place and moving on up. There is nobody I know who has grown so much in their writing and confidence. I pictured the game we used to call "Telephone" and the players. I see you used this three ways, 1. as an example to your staff about communication, 2. as a Faithwriter story. 3. To remind us all to keenly listen to God's correct instruction for our lives. Thank you Barb.
Bonnie Bowden 02/23/11
What a well written piece. I can't imagine a better example of communication gone awry. I also liked the humor.

Congratulations on your placing. I hope I get to read more of your writings.