The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt the sadness in this. Enjoyed the read.
A dual emotion Sad but one can rely on Him. The Lord understands.
Wow I feel like you've been listening to some of the thoughts bobbing around on my head! You really nailed it right on! Beautifully done!
12/17/10
I thought you did a great job on this. I too have some similar struggles and could completely identify. You put the emotion into words perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
12/22/10
I feel this was a tremendous job of describing the struggles of adjustment in marriage, and the heartcry of the heart. God is unquestionably the answer. I love rhyming poems like this and it spoke volumns.
12/23/10
How true! You put in print the thoughts of a lot of women. Did a great job. Congratulations on HC. I did notice one typo.;o)