The Official Writing Challenge
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lovely story it held my interest throughout. We all know a few of those characters...... but of course they are not us :-)
We are all learning. Be encouraged and keep writing but I cannot read this piece because double enter isn't between paragraphs. This makes it very difficult for me to read.

I am a beginner and making different mistakes. be free to comment on mine.

So sorry.
This is beautiful. Some may not think of music as a foreign language but you proved your point with eloquence and beauty! The characters were believable and the type of people I would enjoy.
I liked your story and was suprised (which I like) by the ending. I thought she would come to her senses! Nice story, thanks for writing.