The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
For some reason this feels like english is a second language for you. When I read it from that view point it takes on a very interesting slant. There is a disjointedness, a break in the thought pattern and in the grammar and the rhyme that gives this poem a unique expression.
It is clear that flowers bring you a joy and a reminder of God's love for you and all of us. God bless you and keep writing!
I agree, this is very unique. I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!
I needed to read this a few times, but the more I read it the more I like it. Simple honest theme beautifully expressed. God bless.
10/13/05
Wonderful poem! I don't think that we take enough time to enjoy the beauty of God's nature.