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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Flowers (10/03/05)

TITLE: Be Happy Today
By karen McLamb
10/04/05


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All of us are flowers
Today we are water
With Gods love and kindness
As he prepare nature
He prepare us also
To smell the scent
Of the soil to plant the seed
To see the bud
Grow as a mustard seed
The weeds around it
Is our blessing

As we water our flowers
For our garden has begun
God allow us to be happy today
Just with one flower to smell
As we grow in life you see
The flower will never leave
Oh flower live now and forever
A Flower will always be!
Please give me my flowers now
You see!

That fragrance smell I need
There will always be flowers in our lives
Roses, lilies, gardenia,
These things are only imitation
Of life!

God allow us to smell
Fragrances Of flowers
Each and everyday of our
Lives is just for me
Just for me!


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Michelle Fout10/10/05
For some reason this feels like english is a second language for you. When I read it from that view point it takes on a very interesting slant. There is a disjointedness, a break in the thought pattern and in the grammar and the rhyme that gives this poem a unique expression.
It is clear that flowers bring you a joy and a reminder of God's love for you and all of us. God bless you and keep writing!
Brandi Roberts10/10/05
I agree, this is very unique. I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!
Alexandra Wilkin10/11/05
I needed to read this a few times, but the more I read it the more I like it. Simple honest theme beautifully expressed. God bless.
Garnet Miller 10/13/05
Wonderful poem! I don't think that we take enough time to enjoy the beauty of God's nature.