The Official Writing Challenge
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This was filled with tension and conflict. You did a good job with describing the feelings and fears.

The only thing I was slightly confused about was the c_____. I understand she was afraid to say cancer at first but didn't understand why the doctor couldn't say it unless it meant something else.

Other than that little thing I was enthralled by the whole story and think you did a fantastic job!Congratulations on your EC!!!
Well, I chose to fill in the blanks with COPD, which is something which I have. The article was very well written, but I also wondered for sure what verdict you were expecting. 'Great article none the less.
lots of signposts in this one..... and a common and important topic :-)
I do think the c___ should have been a little earlier in the story, so we would know why she was in the sad mood, other than that, great writing. Thanks.
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level!