The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. I felt chills and a sense of sadness as I read more Hope began to overtake the sadness. Just a quick note when quoting a Bible passage use : in between. For example -- John 3:16-20. Or Psalms 46.
Other then that little tip your message was right on, strong and concise. Good writing!
12/11/10
All I can say is this was a beautiful piece of writing. Being elderly, it was a little like taking a trip through life and finding the gold at the end of the rainbow.
12/14/10
I really liked this! I could picture the past winters the MC was talking about as if I were there. Thanks for writing this piece.
12/15/10
Love This, I volunteer at nursing homes and I see a lot of people that don't get it. I try to bring it out to them. Thanks, Keep Writing!
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