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12/10/10
Some very good thoughts about the beggars on the corner. The gift ,if from the heart, will be looked upon by God, only by what is in your heart.
You brought a really real part of life alive for me. I live in a very rural area and have rarely seen people begging on the streets except for while on a vacation or two the fact that the girl avoided eye contact spoke volumes and really made me think. I also stopped and said a prayer for her wherever she may be now.

I noticed once in the middle you used your when you wanted you're but that's an easy mistake to make- just keep your eyes open for it.

Thank you again for sharing. It really did open my eyes.
12/15/10
We never know when we may be the beggar on the street. Great story, Thanks.
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