The Official Writing Challenge
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12/09/10
I like your writing style - you quite successfully build up the tension of the story. I wish the story went on - you have my interest and I like your characters.
12/10/10
This was a very neat story, and did the challenge justice.
What a sweet story. We all can identify with feeling lost and having Jesus reuse us. Nice job.
12/12/10
good story and well told :-)
12/14/10
Great about the way God sends us solution to finding our way. I would encourage you to keep writing and use all 750 words.
Congratulations on your HC!
12/17/10
congratulations :-)