The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/10
This is a beautiful poem. I'm not sure you interpreted the topic the way it was intended but your poem was chilling it caused me to think and that's always a great thing:)
12/10/10
Great poetry. Truly loved every line.
12/10/10
Beautiful - you convey an excellent truth.
12/10/10
There is a lot of feeling and imagery here, and a relentless pacing. For those us with slower minds, stanza breaks and single-spacing instead of double-spacing, would help us to take it in.
12/12/10
quite a powerful piece... i was not sure if it was poetry or prose.....but some great imagery
12/13/10
Wow! This is very impressive, especially for the beginner level. I seriously love the flow of your poetry!

I very much enjoyed the ending which shows that God uses pain to help us to grow.

Great job!