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This is a great take on the topic. I enjoyed how the MC grew with the signs. Nice job.
12/10/10
All I can say is, this was GREAT, and should be published. You really built up the excitement.
12/10/10
All those signs made for a challenging trip, which you have opened up for us very clearly. A very minor critique: "past" instead of "passed," and "190%," but you have drawn us into the trip very well.
You had me hooked from the opening line! Good job.
12/11/10
Kinda like the Burma-Shave signs but with a God message. I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
12/12/10
an interesting story and i liked the way it unfolded... almost like a treasure hunt :-)
12/13/10
Good title to go with a good story. I liked how the MC was listening to MercyMe music as she drove down the road. :)

I also love the pastor's advice -- that we should turn our life completely around for Christ when we come to Him and not just live for Him halfway. Great message!
12/15/10
Intriguing story with its series of signs. Enjoyed the trip and the pastor's advice was right on.
12/15/10
What a lovely and important testimony you've written!