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This is a great take on the topic. I enjoyed how the MC grew with the signs. Nice job.
All I can say is, this was GREAT, and should be published. You really built up the excitement.
All those signs made for a challenging trip, which you have opened up for us very clearly. A very minor critique: "past" instead of "passed," and "190%," but you have drawn us into the trip very well.
You had me hooked from the opening line! Good job.
Kinda like the Burma-Shave signs but with a God message. I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
an interesting story and i liked the way it unfolded... almost like a treasure hunt :-)
Good title to go with a good story. I liked how the MC was listening to MercyMe music as she drove down the road. :)

I also love the pastor's advice -- that we should turn our life completely around for Christ when we come to Him and not just live for Him halfway. Great message!
Intriguing story with its series of signs. Enjoyed the trip and the pastor's advice was right on.
What a lovely and important testimony you've written!