The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
12/03/10
thank you for sharing this.
You gave a very important message and you're so right about the importance of recognizing depression.

You did seem to jump from first person to third person when telling the story or perhaps you just forgot some quotation marks.

Other than that you did a great job with a difficult topic. It is important to let people know we care.