The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
a doggy tale is a perfect theme for this story
This was a great story. I took the speed walker to mean exercise isn't going to get any better unless she started moving faster. Then when the magic of the birds was described I thought the speedwalker would have missed this beauty in her hurry. It's nice when a story can mean more than one thing to each person. Good job.
12/06/10
Fun take on topic: learning more from animals' actions than quick-talking humans. Yes, there's a lot we can learn from dogs and birds...