The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely story. You've painted a beautiful picture here, capturing a time and place of innocence and joy. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
12/03/10
a lovely story and as the other person said so evocative of summertime gone by
12/06/10
What word pictures you paint! I loved this piece, even though the ending was a little sad. Keep writing!
What a wonderful grandmother. It sounds like a divine childhood. Congratulations on your EC!!!
12/09/10
I have a lump in my throat, absolutely beautiful. Congrats on for EC recognition...that's a BIG deal for someone in Beginners. Well done.
What a great writer you are. Your mind is very creative and you have much talent. Congrats on EC. Loved the fresh voice.
12/10/10
This is a beautiful piece. Don't ever stop writing because you have a serious gift here!
Great story here. Congratulations on EC.