The Official Writing Challenge
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A lovely entry. I like how it ties in at the end. Thanks for sharing.
10/11/05
Beautifully composed, full of realistic thoughts and feelings. Thank you.
10/11/05
Too often we do not keep in touch enough with others! Nice story.
10/12/05
This is touching and well-written. The first paragraph or two seem to belong to a different essay. Good dialog and characterization!
The opening paragraphs are so beautifully descriptive - would like to have seen some more of that description applied to Grace and know more about her. Lovely entry. God bless.
10/13/05
Good description. I like when you described her looking around her home.