The Official Writing Challenge
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i don't think you will be in beginners for long... this is a great piece
This is a great piece! You're wrong about the "typical view of body language." I think you
hit the topic dead on.

Wow! This is an excellent take on the topic of body language, and certain to get some sort of recognition.
Great job! You did a wonderful job with the descriptions.
Actually I think you did an outstanding job of describing the topic. The Editor's note wasn't needed at all. Your beautiful descriptions are a tribute to true love. I feel in love with the couple as well. You did a great job. Congratulations on your EC!!!
Congratulations on your first place in Beginners and your EC recognition as well. This was a beautiful story, well-written, with a wonderful mc.
Very well done. I believe I will be reading more from you. Much talent. Congrats on EC. Loved the voice.
What a touching story, Leola. I'm so glad you're writing. I think I can learn much from you!
there we are ! i am glad the judges agreed that this was a very well written piece and deserving first place.
Congratulations! This is a beautiful story - well written. You completely drew me in.
Congratulations on an EC for a story with great descriptions that also revealed your own beautiful heart.