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This would make a great devotional in a daily reading book. Very well written.
a lovely piece of writing I really enjoyed it. The description is great and it is so well rounded :-)
I learnt alot about sandpipers and also about the lake.... I never knew there was sand there and i want to go and see those sunsets :-)
Creative approach to the topic. Loved the descriptive painting of the scenes and your tie-in to lessons that we can learn from the smallest of God's creations.

I agree. The crisp descriptions and powerful lesson at the end would make a wonderful devotion.
What a nice take on the topic. This is a beautifully written piece. Your descriptions are wonderful. Keep writing.