The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Solidly-based devotional material, with a touch of warmth in the challenge. Very good entry.
This is a great devotion. I think if you
polish it up a touch and add a prayer you should submit it to a devotion magazine. You make such a great point and you demonstrated it in a way everyone can relate to. Good job.
I like how you weave a real life situation with a spiritual application. Very thought provoking. Thank you for this.
11/27/10
Lots of good thoughts in this devotional. Good job!
11/30/10
Great title! A plethora of devotional points to chew on.
You presented the material well, with great "non-preachy" examples. Your last sentence was a great final take-a-way.
Congratulations Barb! You did a great job. I really liked this piece. :)
Congratulations Barb! This is simple and gentle, yet poignant. Great message I will forever remember.